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Offline Reth

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Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« on: January 10, 2022, 02:24:40 PM »
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Hi everybody,

for Redemption an updated player's aid is available:
Would be glad to get your opinions, thoughts, ideas, feedbacks etc.

Unfortunately it does not fit on a single piece of paper (front + back).

Hope you'll enjoy it!  :)

*Edit: Since my former hoster ceased service without any notification/announcement I had to switch to a new one. That hoster does not allow for bigger files than 10 MB though (free hosting).
« Last Edit: February 07, 2022, 06:58:16 PM by Reth »

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2022, 02:47:06 PM »
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This is very nice!
May you prosper greatly!
Daniel 4:1b

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2022, 03:40:48 PM »
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Thank you!  :D

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2022, 04:36:41 PM »
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Uploaded a new version with some small updates after some useful hints from Gabe. Correct site icon was added and brigade footnote corrected.

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2022, 12:02:07 PM »
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This is great Rene, thanks for all the time and effort to make it lol good!

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #5 on: January 13, 2022, 02:22:45 AM »
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Thank you! Really appreciate it (but did not yet get what "lol good" means in particular :D - language barrier on my side).

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #6 on: February 07, 2022, 06:47:40 PM »
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Adjusted links due to new web hoster.

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #7 on: May 31, 2022, 01:56:11 AM »
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New version uploaded. 2 new pages added.

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Re: Updated Redemption Player's Aid available
« Reply #8 on: August 19, 2022, 07:33:10 PM »
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This document is amazing Rene. I would make a few corrections to the wording but other than that it is very helpful. I have written some suggestions below:

-"Whoever goes first does star abilities first, then soul abilities first then starts the turn" should be "Whoever goes first uses chosen star abilities first and the opponent goes after. Lost Soul abilities are resolves in the same way and when completed the first turn starts."
-Draw Phase and Prep description's are missing a period at the end
-Battle Resolution: Instead of "Warrior class characters may retain
a weapon of matching brigade and alignment remaining in
battle." you can say "Surviving warrior class character may equip or exchange weapons of a matching brigade and alignment that remain in battle."
-Discard Phase: I would word it as "Discard down to hand size (which is normally 8 ), then pass the turn." instead of  8"Discard down to 8 cards
(if hand size is greater than 8 ), then pass the turn.
-In the Brigade title there is some weird punctuation, a colon should suffice.
-Under Brigades, would it be possible to put "Rainbow (All)" under the corresponding Brigades?

Let me know your thoughts.

Thank you,
Jared Strauss
« Last Edit: August 20, 2022, 04:29:20 PM by Hymn »