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Warrior_Monk

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Composition of Mine for School...
« on: March 28, 2011, 09:48:29 PM »
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PROJECT 2 ANDREW WESTER

Project 3
Constructive criticism welcome.
« Last Edit: May 13, 2011, 01:39:09 PM by Ring Wraith »
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #1 on: March 28, 2011, 09:51:50 PM »
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Quote from: Ring Wraith on March 28, 2011, 09:48:29 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=StvzDP6eaNM

Constructive criticism welcome.
linky broked...

- To make a link work, press the button that when your mouse scrolls over it it says insert link.  :)
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2011, 09:52:55 PM »
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It's not broke, he justr chose not to link it, but rather, make you spend an extra 5 seconds to copy the link into your browser.
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #3 on: March 28, 2011, 09:54:38 PM »
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Quote from: Alex_Olijar on March 28, 2011, 09:52:55 PM
It's not broke, he justr chose not to link it, but rather, make you spend an extra 5 seconds to copy the link into your browser.
Ohhh.... Thanks Ring Wraith...  ;)
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2011, 11:26:03 PM »
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You're welcome. I'm so used to the old system...
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2011, 01:40:00 PM »
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Bumped with another one added. This was my final. I wasn't able to work on it too much with other finals, and I had to edit the video so there wasn't any talking or anything, so I only had a few weeks to work on it.
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #6 on: May 13, 2011, 01:43:12 PM »
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Well done.  I enjoyed it.  However, it seemed a bit erratic at points.
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #7 on: May 13, 2011, 02:38:19 PM »
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I very much enjoyed project 3. Very cool!  :)
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Re: Composition of Mine for School...
« Reply #8 on: May 13, 2011, 06:46:21 PM »
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The first one was nice but it felt inconsistent, there were a few changes (mostly towards the end) that felt a little to sharp.

The third one was excellent, just one minor gripe though.
The transition to the ruined city in limbo felt a little... odd
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