Open Forum => Off-Topic => Topic started by: Gil Galad Elven King *Generic on September 30, 2009, 05:42:06 PM
Title: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is....
Post by: Gil Galad Elven King *Generic on September 30, 2009, 05:42:06 PM
I want as many opinions as I can get, so go to my blog (link below), and read the part of the story I posted, then post a comment and let me know what you think. If you want to criticize it, make sure it's constructive.
Go Here to read it! (http://www.philsnextkick.com/2009/09/straight_from_the_mind/)
Title: Re: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is....
Post by: Smokey on September 30, 2009, 05:49:24 PM
Title: Re: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is....
Post by: Gil Galad Elven King *Generic on September 30, 2009, 05:55:17 PM
hmm... I had the intent of this story being sort of a thriller of sorts, but I can see from your comment Smokey how it can been taken entirely differently all because of the way I wrote it... interesting...
Title: Re: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is....
Post by: Smokey on September 30, 2009, 06:05:20 PM
Seemed more like a love story to me, Thrillers usually don't have endings like that :P.
Title: Re: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is....
Post by: Gil Galad Elven King *Generic on October 01, 2009, 08:13:33 AM
That's not the end of the story though, just a part. I can definitely see where I need to define more in certain places though. Thanks!
Title: Re: Come on, tell me how bad my writing is....
Post by: Clarinetguy097 on October 01, 2009, 04:59:39 PM
I haven't read it, but it can't be as bad as my writing :)