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Redemption® Collectible Trading Card Game HQ => Redemption® Resources and Thinktank => New Card Ideas => Topic started by: Townsend on February 06, 2011, 06:36:23 PM
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The Call to Serve
brigade: Gold Class:territory
SA: Place in your territory for three turns. While this card remains Negate Protect abilities on opponents Evil Characters and Evil Fortress's. Each turn opponent may draw a card instead.
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I see what you're going for, but it'd be tricky to word. As written you get what it means, but it doesn't actually work.
Perhaps:
"Set your Luke or John Hero aside for three turns. Each upkeep, negate Protect abilities on one opponent's Evil Characters and Evil Fortresses for one round. He may draw a card instead."
Slightly different to account for Multiplayer, but basically what you meant, right?
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Yep that is exactly what I was going for