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Title: sin of lust
Post by: redeemed2012 on April 27, 2022, 10:06:42 AM
deadly sin of lust 1/1 orange/crimson territory class evil enhancement. star ability: draw x (x=# of deadly sins). regular ability: place on your evil character
 except a demon if character blocks u may take a card from opponent's deck if u don't character may band to any number of female evil characters    cbp 1 peter 2:11
Title: Re: sin of lust
Post by: INoahGuy on April 30, 2022, 08:29:51 AM
personally, I would word it differently and give it some buffs, right now it is essentially nic's teaching but worse. I would first give it TC, give it a deadly sin identifier, and perhaps make the star something like draw x (x=number of your deadly sin enhancements.) and lastly buff the sin the like, place on character, if that character blocks you may take a card from opponent's deck. the cbp, stats, brigades, etc. imo are fine.
Title: Re: sin of lust
Post by: dermo4christ on April 30, 2022, 11:19:51 PM
personally, I would word it differently and give it some buffs, right now it is essentially nic's teaching but worse. I would first give it TC, give it a deadly sin identifier, and perhaps make the star something like draw x (x=number of your deadly sin enhancements.) and lastly buff the sin the like, place on character, if that character blocks you may take a card from opponent's deck. the cbp, stats, brigades, etc. imo are fine.

This is good. However, to fit the sin identity I would add "May band to any number of characters of different gender." Fits the "lust" theme I think
Title: Re: sin of lust
Post by: TheJaylor on May 02, 2022, 10:51:42 AM
Or, "Place in a territory: Decrease Heroes in this territory X/X." X = number of characters of opposite alignment and gender in play
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