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Redemption® Collectible Trading Card Game HQ => Redemption® Resources and Thinktank => New Card Ideas => Topic started by: ArmedKevin117 on December 15, 2018, 03:49:46 PM

Title: A wording suggestion based on TSC and Chariot of Fire
Post by: ArmedKevin117 on December 15, 2018, 03:49:46 PM
With Chariot of Fire, we now have two doms that share the line "May not be included in a deck with (card)."
I would suggest that any future cards that behave like that shorten it to "Excludes (card)."
Title: Re: A wording suggestion based on TSC and Chariot of Fire
Post by: EmJayBee83 on December 15, 2018, 10:20:01 PM
With Chariot of Fire, we now have two doms that share the line "May not be included in a deck with (card)."
I would suggest that any future cards that behave like that shorten it to "Excludes (card)."
Usage nit:  I think you mean "Precludes (card)"
Title: Re: A wording suggestion based on TSC and Chariot of Fire
Post by: ArmedKevin117 on December 16, 2018, 08:54:56 PM
With Chariot of Fire, we now have two doms that share the line "May not be included in a deck with (card)."
I would suggest that any future cards that behave like that shorten it to "Excludes (card)."
Usage nit:  I think you mean "Precludes (card)"

That works too... probably better.
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